Planet Valtrax

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A world forged for supremacy, Valtrax exists under a crushing gravity nearly 10,000 times that of Earth, where only the absolute strongest lifeforms can endure. Every step on its surface is a battle against unimaginable force, shaping the Valtraxians into beings of overwhelming physical dominance. Despite its brutal gravity, the planet is breathtaking—an untamed paradise of lush, dense ecosystems that cling stubbornly to the land. Towering mountain ranges rise like jagged crowns, their peaks cutting through the sky, formed from stone compressed into near-indestructible density. Vast forests thrive under the weight, their vegetation thick, resilient, and impossibly vibrant. Winding through this immense landscape are rivers that shimmer like liquid sapphire, their deep blue glow cutting through the terrain like veins of energy. These waters, heavy and mineral-rich, flow slowly but with unstoppable force, carving paths through even the hardest stone.
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The air trembles under crushing gravity as the Sparring Grounds stretch endlessly across fractured stone and scarred terrain, every inch soaked in the legacy of past battles. Children—no older than fourteen—move like living weapons, their bodies honed beyond reason as fists collide with bone-cracking force and shockwaves ripple through the dust-choked arena. There is no hesitation, no mercy—only the brutal rhythm of impact and adaptation. Blood stains the ground as quickly as it dries, and the silent overseers watch without intervention, their gaze cold and expectant. Here, weakness is not corrected—it is erased. Only those who endure, who evolve mid-battle, earn the right to stand among the future of the Valtraxian Empire.
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With the roars and screams of the Valtraxian New Generation, The Grand Reagent stood upon the stadium's over view, his Valtraxian attire pristine as the violent gusts of raw wind force blows past him from the children battling to the death. His silver eyes staring with a cold detachment as he knew only the strong would come victorious in this Proving Trials. His arms crossed over his chest, his lean dense muscles fitted by the Empires attire.
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Watching as the young Boys and girls tear at one anothers flesh, with the instinct of survival is Honor, Victory is life, and Weakness is Death, he stood as the most respected Valtraxian not by his direct blood relations to the old Grand Reagent Nalo, but rather his way of guiding their empire to a grander greatness. And though the Tests were brutal this was a necessity for all Young Valtraxian's to over come, as any to not be able to survive this culling of the weak were never truly Valtraxian's to begin with. And while Vaelin Thorne was the Official Second Strongest in terms of Raw physical Prowess, falling under his most trusted left hand man Kyaro. He was definitely the one with the grandeur vision for their Empires Future and the highest Potential. With the Proving test continuing he awaited for the arrival of that very same person as news of their next conquest target was already decided, a world needing preparation for the Khans arrival. A planet located outside Neutral Space, within the Prime Universe called Namek.

And as his eyes fixated on the youths battling, ripping and tearing one another apart; The instinctive nature of conquest still ran through his blood, as normally he'd trust Kyaro with a Vanguard Task force of High Reagents like Kyaro but this was the one time he himself would feel the need to let loose as for a race like theirs staying on the planet would only dull their blood lust.
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Location: Planet Valtrax- Proving Grounds
Post Order: Vaelin- Kyaro
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The Erlik Tide drifted across empty space brimming with an unnatural strength. It was a leviathan of calcified hatred. Born of the bones of the Great Khan’s conquests. Molded by him to take the shape of the fate of all those who defied him.
The prow takes on the form of a massive, lipless skull, its eyesockets glowing with an unnatural light from the energies swirling within. Its jaw was elongated into a sweeping, serrated blade, as if the ship itself had been designed to ram. Behind the visage of death lay a hull stretched back into a series of rib-like arches, textured with the porous, weathered grain of a fossil that once belonged to an ancient beast of massive proportions.
The moment it came into the Valtraxian System all knew of his arrival. Even from the edges of the system they felt his presence. A heaving sea of evil rolling in on a wave of dread and despair. It had not been intentional, or perhaps it was, as the twin sensations followed him wherever he went.
The Great Khan himself resided inside his court. It had been a vast space of fluted columns, arches springing from the imposts to create a soaring, ribbed ceiling. Its scale is immense, humbling, designed to create an artificial infinite. Even here the Great Khan had been a tiny spec of crimson amongst the obsidian and basalt. Many believed such a chamber had been unable to exist in his realm, too neat, too clean.
It is why the Great Khan had spruced it to his liking.
On every inch between the ribs of the ceiling there were bodies, broken and flayed, nailed down like a butterfly pinned to a board. Their bodies formed a lattice of gore in the architecture. What had been worse is that they were in a state of undeath by a mixture of advanced magics and sciences. The only part of their body, other than their flesh that the Great Khan had taken, had been their lungs. All so that they may never draw his air again.
Sitting upon a Throne of Basalt and Obsidian the Great Khan sat. His corpse-eyes flickered toward a hooded figure in the shadows. Upon feeling his master’s gaze the figure stepped forward and knelt down in front of him. The Great Khan nodded to him and from beneath the shadow of the hood emerged two momentary flashes of green. An optical signal showing that the Great Khan had connected directly to the Valtraxian Command Center.

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“Heed my words and listen well. I will only say this once.”​

The Great Khan’s voice rang out like a whip of booming thunder within the chamber. Hissing was audible from the men hanging overhead trying to scream without lungs. His words alone were a commanding presence that wounded them. Though it had been his next words, spoken with authority, that stilled them into silence.
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“Stand ready for my arrival.”​
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With the sudden pressure shift on Planet Valtrax's just as the appearance of the commonly versed and known Commanding ship of The Khan, The sudden appearance of the Khan and his voice demanding their preparation for his arrival, Vaelin's eyes slowly rise up as the children stopped their brutal ritual, with some heavily damaged, some being mutilated but alive, while the strong remained mildly battle damaged but perfectly standing proud. Vaelin though slowly lifted his hand causing the children and spectating Valtraxian adults to take one knee as he himself slowly began lifting on the ground, his cells producing a personal gravitational field to allow flight as he suddenly began accelerating towards the Ship in planet Valtrax's Stratosphere, all while the rest of the Valtraxian's remained in a kneeling posture out of respect towards The Khan.

His acceleration on Planet Valtrax seemed almost natural in speed, not reaching anything spectacular due to the planets 10k times earths gravity as he slowly; but most certainly was closing the distance between himself and the ship's docking bay.
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Location: Planet Valtrax- Proving Grounds- The Khan's Ship
Post Order: Vaelin- The Khan- Kyaro
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The Loading Bay of the Erlik Tide was a sight to behold. Races of all sorts scurrying about its deck. Some adorned with blinking collars, others wielding whips enchanted with runes. Their braided bodies prepared to amplify their pain they deliver thricefold due to the magicks imbued in them. Cruel as it may be to enslave another, these were the few who initially invaded the Qaghans, hoping to do the same to them first. Their redemption was a hundred lifetimes of servitude for those who lived centuries and thousands for those of shorter lifespans.
When the Valtraxian stepped foot on board they all knelt before him. Even Qaghans who have served under the Great Khan for a multitude of years. Vaelin was a Vanguard, a subsect of the Great Khan’s Trident, thus he commanded respect. Only a singular hooded figure dared to take a step in his direction.
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“The Great Khan welcomes you to the Erlik Tide.” ​

It bowed its head as if commanded in that instant. As it did a mess of tendrils fell from its mouth that writhed like living vines untangling themselves. From its mouth a sound emerged reminiscent of slurping as the tendrils begin to force themselves back beneath the hood. During the short time they were visible they were scaled, coated in a strange mucus, and had feelers on the end that seemed to have small mouths attached to them that opened and closed on their own accord.
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“Follow me and I shall lead you to him.”​

This is the first time that Vaelin Thorne had ever been requested to join the Great Khan upon his flagship. A year ago when the Great Khan met with him he had descended upon Valtrax without issue. He warned Vaelin of a growing threat in the furthest reaches of the stars. One that he intended to meet and meet he did. Whatever battle ensued had been one of immense proportions, as since that fateful day, the Great Khan had still to return to his prior strength. Even a feat as simple as standing upon the surface of Valtrax with its gravity had turned into something that required more effort than anticipated.
Vaelin was brought before a door that seemed to be made of a mixture between bone and metal. Upon it were visceral depictions of twisted abominations long-since snuffed out by the Imperium’s master. The hooded figure muttered something beneath its hood. Combined with its tendrils it made a guttural noise which Vaelin would barely manage to decipher.
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“May thy foe drown and bloat, in the depths of the Dead Sea, where tormented souls forever flow.”​

The symbols upon the door began to take on a crimson glow. Then the door and the wall alike began to twist and distort as if warped by the sorcery. The hooded figure guided Vaelin through into the Court of the Great Khan. If Vaelin looked behind him at any point after entering he found that no door seemed to exist. As if he had never been to the loading bay to begin with. Though that had merely been the least interesting detail as all around him were the bodies of mangled corpses, screaming lungless, as they were nailed to the walls of his artificial infinite.
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“Come, Vaelin.” ​

The Great Khan’s voice boomed across the hall even though he had meant to only speak those words.
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“There is little time to be had. Gather the Vanguard and be prepared to move. Namek may wait, as for now, I have a new order to issue. One in which I will need the Valtraxians to accompany me. I trust that I can count on you and your people's support in this endeavor?”​
 
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The Moment that Vaelin stepped into the Khan's chambers, it was at that moment that Vaelin took a knee, his left hand pushing its knuckles against the obsidian floors, his right arm behind him as his head lowers to avoid direct eye contact out of a sign of respect. With the Khan's words bellowing through the chambers, Vaelin took in each and every connotation spoken, each directive and order as he spoke with a calm and collected tone, even while under the pressure of the Khan's presence,​
"I see, Then Where shall your vanguard be deploying to Lord Khan. Which world in the Prime universe shall we prepare for your arrival?"​
His words were chosen quite specifically and carefully as he knew after watching his fathers death, the Khan demands loyalty, efficiency and respect over all things.
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Kyaro had been close by as his son was participating the battle of the new generation training, though he was closely watching up at the atmosphere since he noticed something strange. There was a mysterious light isolated in the neutral space near their planet but he had no idea what it was. This was something he definitely didn't plan on letting go, however, everything shifted on Planet Valtrax; The children stopped battling, then he watched Vaelin give the signal to the others to bow. Kyaro however followed Vaelin upwards after generating a gravitational field around himself to fly up towards The Khan's ship. While he followed Vaelin to the ship, he didn't bother following him to the exact location of where he was meeting Khan since he wasn't invited in. Instead, he'd wait by the ship entrance for his close friend and leader to return with the information on what it was that they were needed for.​


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Vaelin kneels the instant he enters the Great Khan’s abode. He does so as a sign of respect. The Khan knows this because it had been his way ever since he slayed Vaelin’s father. A day he remembers well, crushing Nalo’s skull beneath his hammer, coating himself in grey-matter and gore. Part of him wondered if Vaelin understood that he was more of a man than Nalo ever was. Not just in terms of strength, but in his ability to lead.
A stifled, satisfied grunt emerges from the Great Khan’s throat. It is a symbol enough for Vaelin to know that he is to rise. He casts a shadow that looms like a thundercloud as he raises his hand and motions to him. In that same vein the others in the Court, hooded figures all, begin to disappear into the walls as if molding into them. Until finally, it is just the two of them, and Vaelin hopefully stands before him just a few feet away.
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“Earth.”​

The synonym for weakness in his own vocabulary. Despite this warriors from eons ago were said to have come from there. Some of them capable of wiping out the Great Khan without a second thought. Yet as time had gone by they seemed to have weakened. Proven by the Galactic Patrol’s databanks, at least, the few the Imperium has managed to carve their way into.
It is also in those databases that the Great Khan had learned of something else too. That upon that wretched planet lay a Galactic Patrol Agent. A Saiyan by the name of Eschel. One that the Great Khan had put a hit out for a mere moment before Vaelin had come into his Court.
The reason for that is that he had also heard rumors of an Assassin. One known galaxy-wide for getting the job done right. No targets had ever managed to escape his sights. Once he had been given a mission it was his duty to ensure it was complete. The amount of bodies that trailed behind him were numerous, so much so, that it had drawn the Khan’s attention.
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“Though you will not go under my banner or that of the Valtraxians.”​

Slowly, but surely, the Great Khan began to descend from his throne. He stepped down onto invisible steps that were not truly there. Even so the impact from doing so had been enough to make it seem as if a physical material lay beneath his feet. His mastery of flight and his own Ki, although not as impressive as some throughout the galaxy, almost seemed like a second nature.
Before he descended upon the final few false-steps, the Great Khan waved his hand toward Vaelin. The Black and Purple of his bodysuit changed to the colors of another empire altogether. Where once the Mark of the Khan lied was now that of a Frost Demon. One who had raised the Khan’s ire for taking under his thumb the Hera Clan. The race of teal-skinned warriors might have been useful, destroyers similar to the Valtraxians, fuelled to the brim with power that could be tamed.

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“The Empire that Tundra has spawned out of spite of his brother has wrought an unfathomable insolence. One that has raised my ire greatly. Yet I can not strike at him directly. I must first grow stronger, cultivate my power, until I am once again whole.”​

The Great Khan’s right hand closed into a tight fist. He felt old pains surge through his body as he attempted to feel his strength. It is nothing like it had been before. Despite this he was still stronger than a majority of his foes throughout the galaxy. To him it was not enough to still the coming end of his Imperium if another threat than the one he sealed away were to arise.
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“Upon arrival you will announce yourselves as entities loyal to Tundra’s Empire. You will make your appearance grandiose. Compare your species and all those under his Empire as superior to their own. Then you will make a mockery of Earth and its people.”​

Though neither of them had the ability to sense Ki, the pressure of the Great Khan began to build, as he molded his power within him. The wind began to wisp all around him, circling, as if creating a vortex. The wave of dread and despair began to chime out across the planet once more and intensify. Those of weak will were going to feel as if all hope in this realm between realms was hopeless.
He opened his hand and in his palm an orb of golden light began to form. Golden arcs of electricity danced across its surface. Then, slowly but surely, it began to take the form of a spear. Ethereal, bright, standing almost as tall as he did. A weapon worthy to be wielded by the Great Khan.

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“The only stipulation is that I want every major city that you come across destroyed. Eradicated to the point of no return. Yet the planet itself must remain unharmed. Do it quickly, do it efficiently, but purposefully leave witnesses to your wrath. If you accomplish this goal you and the Vanguard will be rewarded a hundred times over.”​
 
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Rising to his feet, as both arms went behind his back, his silver eyes stared at the Khan as he heard each and every word, Earth, the target to be prepared for their arrival, a False Flag Operation to shift the blame to this Tundra Empire, and to lead to civilization extinction without the destruction of the planet. A mission quite simple as Vaelin spoke with a calm tone,​
"This Earth... Its inhabitants are combatants? And if so what are we to expect Lord Khan?"​
As he asked this this wasn't just a perplexing question, this was due to Valtraxian's inability to utilize Ki or magic, as though the Valtraxian's Relish in a challenge they also like to be quite informed especially since their defeat against the Qagans ages ago. But as Vaelin stood at attention, awaiting the answer of his question from The Khan, watching as the spear made of a mystical energy formulated and condensed into the hand of the Khan, though he himself was physically stronger than the Khan, he knew due to the lack of Ki or magic the fight would not play in any Valtraxian's favor should they revolt against The Khan.

Nonetheless, his hands behind him snapped a finger, a low vibration that traveled the room as Vaelin knew only one person would ever follow him to the Khan's ship. This snap was to Signal that individual to enter the Khan's chambers for this mission briefing.
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While standing the at the entrance of the ship, a certain signaled snap got his attention which caused a low and short chuckle to escape his lips. As such, Kyaro took a single slow step forward and the moment the heel of his foot touched the pavement of the ship's floor; Kyaro vanished from that very spot and in an instant, he appeared right beside Vaelin with his elbowing aiming to rest of Vaelin's shoulder.

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With that he'd stare directly at the Khan and out of respect, he'd lower his presence significantly to avoid the Khan viewing him as an enemy or potential threat. His silver eyes locked onto the Khan with a most mischievous and bloodthirsty expression on his face. The only reason Khan would call them is if he needed their help fighting someone or if he needed someone dead. Either one was good for him but he still wanted to know what exactly what it was he wanted.
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Kyaro: So, what's with the sudden visit and something about standing ready for your arrival?​


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